Left me longing
Every dock door or window
A porthole on a sinking ship
The horizon, passing cars
Going places better than here
Biting my lip, stifling my tears
I assemble one more widget
I want to cut the cord
Instead, with clenched jaw,
I denounce my visions
and
draw
the
blinds
I wish there was a favorite button!!
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For me, you just pressed it 🙂
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Moving poem. If we could all realize that the contented feeling starts on the other side of those blinds we can keep closed so easily…our eyes…it starts in our own mind!
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Change our window-frame-of-mind? 🙂
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How very powerful. Rather reminds me why I’m glad I no longer have a day job. 🙂 Erich, you have a true gift.
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Thanks for the kind words! 🙂
Although I am now incredibly envious
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The story of my life as seen through my Son. “It is never too late to be what you might have been.” George EliotThe secret to joy in work is contained in one word….abstinence.Jim
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Some patterns seem hard to break, eh?
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Don’t give up. Keep following your heart.
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Oh I won’t…not now that I have the support of my fellow writers here on WordPress 🙂
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I’m usually comment-shy but these are amazing words.
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Thank you so much…I’m glad to draw you out 🙂
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I love your writing so much
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Thanks 🙂
I envy your ability to twist the written word into submission and mold such moving passages. Really great! 🙂
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I like poetry that keeps me asking questions, you do a good job here. I wondered, could I make a response to this poem?
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I would love to see a response…will you do it? 🙂
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I think I have toomuch free time on my hands…https://liyonadancer100.wordpress.com/2015/10/22/mundane-mediocraty/
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Nothing wrong with free time and you can never have too much 🙂
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I like the positivity in the responses, but i can’t get away from the sadness of the piece. Like a dying fish on the shore, letting the dreams evaporate. Great piece, nicely worked….even if it did depress me slightly. hehe.
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It had to reread the responses and you’re right, they are rather positive for a piece I wrote on the suffering of wage earning off anything other than your hearts-work.
Oh man…if you keep digging you’ll find most of my poems are depressing.
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Good you have a support hammock to relax in with the comments and free spirits. Don’t let the depression pull you under, it’s the little things that do that.
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Story style; like, like….😊
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Thanks, Diana! 🙂
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