They hid it at first
He was so young
Only four
They’d call him a freak
Two little nubbins
One on each shoulder blade
Loose shirts
Windbreaker jacket
Then the first event happened
Fucking tuna fish can
Sliced his mom’s hand right open
Oh how the red scared him
Nerve damage
Limp fingers
She was struggling to dial
Goddamn rotary phone
She felt woozy
Then two little hands reached out
Gently taking hold of hers
As he placed his head against her
The nubbins stretched out
Featherless little wings
His mother was dumbfounded
She didn’t notice the bleeding
Had stopped
He buried his face
Into her stomach
I love you, mama
The next day they grew
Twice in size
More difficult to hide
Homeschooling was the answer
A couple years slipped by
His questions became more pointed
His need to see the world deepened
She began taking him on outings
Planetarium, museum, theater, petting zoo
She worried so
Then the second event happened
During a long elevator ride down
To the underground caverns
A middle aged man collapsed
An RN performed CPR until exhaustion
She couldn’t save him
The little boy looked up at his mother
His eyes pleading
Her face twisting
She nodded once and turned away
She could hear the gasps
Knowing life would never be the same
The canopy of the tent fluttered
With the wind blowing outside
He missed the feeling of wind and sun
The revival would be starting soon
His wings were the size of a condor’s
The tips dragging on the ground
His mother gripping her rosary
Muttered about the crowd gathering
The 2:00 show
He looked so gaunt to her
The preacher’s sermon
Was all fire
And brimstone
Then the lines formed
With each passing touch
Each person given a new lease
He felt himself slipping further away
The doctors and scientists tore him apart
In the end they determined his wings
Were a cancer
And when he couldn’t give anymore
Of himself
He stretched his wings
For the final time
Slipping into oblivion
Wow! like…woah. What can I say? I wouldn’t change a thing! I loved this narrative poem. Just my taste! Keep it up!
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Thank you so much, FFP! Very glad you liked it! 🙂
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I love this kind of writing… excellent!
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Thank you, my friend! 🙂
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I agree with the other comments…awesome!
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Thank you, Donna! I’m very glad you liked it! 😀
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Reblogged this on A Global Divergent Literary Collective and commented:
Erich Michaels
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Thank you for the reblog! 🙂
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You’re so welcome! ❤
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❤️
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incredible.. painful read for me… so well-written..
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Thank you, Anthony! Very pleased you liked it!
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Nothing to say but.. read
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Thank you for the reblog, my friend!
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