Her succulent mind, a jade plant
Petals of thought, drop from her lips
Taking root in the fertile soil of my imagination
My muse
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erichmichaels 
That is amazing, Haiku I presume?
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No…just my attempt at poetry. 🙂
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Oh, well either way it was wonderful
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Thank you 🙂
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did you take that picture?
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I did take a picture of a jade plant I have, which is young and leggy, but I couldn’t get a good composition from it, so I got this pic off of google.
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Oh thats okay
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Sweet “It is never too late to be what you might have been.” George EliotThe secret to joy in work is contained in one word….abstinence.Jim
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Pleasant piece, that.
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Thank you.
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~Nice poem! ^^
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Love this poem – is your muse a Jade plat or is her mind like a Jade plant… either way she should be in your living room to make you the most money – according to the rules of Fung Shui 😉
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I’m gonna pick out a spot in the living room right now 😀
I’m glad you liked it–thanks!
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I like the linking of succulent and mind, I’d never thought of those two going together but you do it well here. The muse’s mind like a plant, thoughts dropping from her lips and into your mind. Coming out of your mind and into this poem.
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It struck me that a jade plant is a succulent, in that it stores water in its fleshy petals/leaves and how the muse’s mind is similar in its storage of ideas as life giving water. It was a stretch but that’s how my mind worked. Lol
Thanks for the kind words 🙂
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Solid poem, good use of words. Short but sweet
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Thanks 🙂
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Succinctly satisfying. Very nice Erich!
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Thank you 😊
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